Got the first working version of Love encoded no assets or music just text it is very short only a minute long but it works and I want feedback on the dialog so please help me with that. :)

https://loz-zoz.itch.io/love-encoded-pre-release

I've started work on my new game called love encoded it's a virtual novel/dating sim about an experiment related to robotic love the first build is going to have the first two characters Omen and Big Tim(my friend named him) and some basic chats and choices, I hope I cant get the first build out quickly over the summer